I’M DONE!!! This re-draft has ended up taking up a massive amount more time than I expected, but it’s fantastic to see it all together. The first third of the story is all in finished pages or thumbnails, the second third is a hybrid of thumbnails and script, and the last third (which has had the most re-working done to it) is all script. I’m pleased with how it’s all gone, I feel like the focus is much tighter and the story more engaging around the end of the second third/beginning of the last third. Now I just gotta run the gauntlet of edits…! More soon.