They start with a few stones and before you know it, it’s too late… here’s a visual depiction of the aftermath of this re-write in stages!

Aaaand you can see where I am now! I’ve just finished typing up and organising all these notes systematically, and now I can get to doing some more scene tweaks. Phew.


  1. And? How is your attempt to control the avalange working out?

  2. I’m in the middle of turning all the new changes and some new scenes into a full script and integrating into the old one :) I’ll post a larger update soon!

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